Rate 3RG3R's Song Lyrics

These are all lyrics written by @3RG3R
He wishes to know your thoughts and advice on this, so please comment and rate below!

Verse 1:

I’m broken in despair,

There is not one thing that could mend me from the tear.

Please listen, i’m alone

‘Cause this old household don’t feel like home.

Chorus:

I’m drowning in my tears, from the cuts that will never heal. I’ve never felt so alone, will I ever find home?

Verse 2:

O’ Brothers, come here

I’m in need of a little care.

And Grandma, please appear

there is nobody else I felt so near.

Chorus:

I’m drowning in my tears, from the cuts that will never heal. I’ve never felt so alone, will I ever find home?

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Could be better :person_shrugging:

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cliche

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Gotta put at least one suicide refrence to make it a depressing song smh

thats pretty good
if you need any help with this dm me
ngl im kinda good at songwriting

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I’d like this more if I heard the music probably, I wanna know about the cadence

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yeah absolutely

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Wheres 0 option? :joy: (joke)

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i used ai

Savage Heartbreak

I Keep Trying, grinding in the game, no lie

Pushing through the pain, can’t let my spirit die

Battle scars show, I won’t f***ing hide

In the arena, yeah, that’s where I reside

Ayy, the haters say I’m trash, they can f***ing quack

But they don’t know the fire burning in my track

In PVP, I’m a beast, watch me attack

Every loss, every win, I take it back

No time for tears, only blood, sweat, and strife

Fing up my enemies, that’s my fing life

From the streets to the screen, I own the night

Rise and shine, keep the fight in my sight

Uh, they call me toxic, but I own the crown

In this game of life, I won’t back down

Slaying all day, never wearing a frown

F*** the pain, I wear it like a gown

Ayy, my heart’s heavy with the weight of defeat

But I’ll keep going, never admit defeat

In the game of life, I’ll take the heat

Savage heartbreak, my story’s not discreet

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Looks like a sleaford mods song

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mid

“mid” i beat you wit it btw

I’ve become a ghost, how bizarre, and tomorrow will go see you wherever you are
And then just what shall I do?
I certainly can’t tell that to you

I’ve become a ghost, it’s so strange
And I’m off to see the way summer ends with no change
In this studio-sized earth, at a bus stop shaded by the trees

Kicking pebbles outside near the bug light
Your hands chilling in the cold air of the night
And the faint lights of town waver from sight

Even with nobody seeing
Even with nobody speaking
Even with nobody noticing a thing
Well, even so, I still seem to know

There’s one thing I know: that at the bus stop we were sitting at,
When I looked up, there was a blue sky
The clouds are far off, see?
It’s hard to believe, that the clouds at night are so high in the sky
And so you see, it’s all okay now

Since I’ve become a ghost at last
I’m now off to see places I saw in my past
The beach in a far off place, shopping stalls I saw as a child

With feet that are sore from walking
I’ll sit at the bench at the bus stop, just waiting
And then just what shall I do?
Just where was it I was walking to?

And without knowing anything,
And without hearing anything,
Even if you forget every single thing;
Well, even so, I’ll be watching you

Sitting in the summer shadows; staring up at the storm clouds overhead
It somehow makes my heart ache in pain
The sky is so high, see?
I wish that I could go far away just as I am right now
But now at night, all I can do is sleep

There’s one thing I know: that at the bus stop we were sitting at,
When I looked up, there was a blue sky
The clouds are far off, see?
It’s hard to believe, that the clouds at night are so high in the sky

And so you see, and so you see
Even for you, it’s all okay now

I’ve become a ghost, how bizarre, and tomorrow will go see you wherever you are
I wonder then what will I do?
Since you won’t be able to see me

Cloud and Ghost
translated by someone else that’s better than translating then me
The Clouds and the Ghost – Yorushika – Silver's Lyrics

Better than translating then me

skibidi toilet better :money_mouth_face:

I have no experience with music so idk

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